This was even more heartbreaking than the first part. It's so depressing to know they all mean well but nevertheless everything spins out of control. It's like watching a bad car accident - you don't want to see it, but nevertheless you just can't look away.

I think my favorite scene is Sammy bringing the honey spoon for Dean. And of course Dean refuses to take it, because when does Dean ever think he deserves anything? And Sam standing there covered in honey, feeling all rejected. And then John being all affectionate - but not a way that translates to Sam. So in the end it's all in vain. It's just so beautifully... depressing.

Anyway, this verse to me feels a lot like the pre-series stories big_pink writes. And it's just as awesome. The more I read from you the more I think your stuff is completely underrated in this fandom.

And now I'm really really *really* looking forward to the next part.