I don't have words for just how awesome this fic is. I loved it soooooo much!
I find this a wonderful answer to the question of how the boys started in on the wincest with the added bonus of exploring the mental institute setting. I found your portrayal of the disorientation Sam in particular felt early on to hit all the right notes and you really piled on the angest (in a good way, just the right amount). I may or may not have had a little sniffle on occasion. The thread of humour running through this was brilliantly judged in alleviating some of the tension that might have made this fic depressing. Finally, I really liked how the staff of the institution were never portrayed as evil, just indifferent at worst; doing a job not a labour of love.
Wonderfully written, thank you very much for sharing
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I find this a wonderful answer to the question of how the boys started in on the wincest with the added bonus of exploring the mental institute setting. I found your portrayal of the disorientation Sam in particular felt early on to hit all the right notes and you really piled on the angest (in a good way, just the right amount). I may or may not have had a little sniffle on occasion. The thread of humour running through this was brilliantly judged in alleviating some of the tension that might have made this fic depressing. Finally, I really liked how the staff of the institution were never portrayed as evil, just indifferent at worst; doing a job not a labour of love.
Wonderfully written, thank you very much for sharing