Wow. At first i didn't know where you were going with this, and i thought that you were just going to end by one of the boys stabbing themselves and voila! they woke up in the real world. LOL

But this is beautifully written, as i went deeper into the story. The back story was great, and the history of how they got there gets a little confusing sometimes, but soon you set it straight and yes, the story flows as strong as before.

The word count is slightly intimidating, though. Haha. I gotta wait til now so that i have enough time to read them all. :)

Great job!