You are so clever; you put in so many fantastic details to give your story a depth that made it a joy to read. The visual aids were absolutely great; I loved them. I loved how you put a magnifying glass to the towns and the people, the meals the boys ate. It just made this wonderful story so much more involving and "real".

Your Sam broke my heart in his pining for moremoremore of Dean. And it was kind of hard to read Dean being so uptight and negative, but it was heartening that he didn't cut Sam out completely. Loved how you portrayed the boys relationship gets strained but they never stop caring about each other.

This was the perfect mix of my favorite themes for the Winchesters; casefic, road trip, love story. Thank you.