YOu've created a wonderful atmosphere. Small towns really are their own realities and I can totally see a ghost calmly asking the descendent of one of her attackers to put her to rest. Politeness is a virtue when families all know each other.

Sam and Dean know all about being extra polite to each other to cover up those litte awkward moments...

One typo: Under his palm he can fell Dean’s cock, coming up, hardening. I think Sam can feel it.