Wow! This is the most intense and heartbreaking story I've read in a long long time. All the little deatils you put there - the sounds, the smells, the dust... I felt as if I was actually there, feeling the heat, the dust, Sam's pain and anger, John's fury, Dean's concern.
Sweet on his tongue, and a bit of acid, raw honey, heating in his mouth, melting away, slipping down his throat. He sucked on the spoon till it was all gone, feeling the hot tears slip sideways down his face and into his ear.
Such a deatiled, great description. I guess my english is not good enough to explain how I really felt I was seeing this with my own eyes, even feeling it myself.
I normally don't like fics in which John is physically abusive(spanking included, Its abuse for me), because they are unrealistic and either bastardise(is thet even a word ?) JOhn or make him look hypocritical. He was really cruel in this fic(and I wanted to strangle him with that damn belt), but it was very well written and believable.
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Sweet on his tongue, and a bit of acid, raw honey, heating in his mouth, melting away, slipping down his throat. He sucked on the spoon till it was all gone, feeling the hot tears slip sideways down his face and into his ear.
Such a deatiled, great description. I guess my english is not good enough to explain how I really felt I was seeing this with my own eyes, even feeling it myself.
I normally don't like fics in which John is physically abusive(spanking included, Its abuse for me), because they are unrealistic and either bastardise(is thet even a word ?) JOhn or make him look hypocritical. He was really cruel in this fic(and I wanted to strangle him with that damn belt), but it was very well written and believable.