I really appreciate the fact that you read my story AND posted, even though this type of story is not your thing. And that it got to you, and affected you - well, that just makes my day. Which is a funny thing to say about a story that's so hard to read because so many bad things happen. Thank you for your kind comments!

I think John walks a fine line in training his boys. Sometimes he goes to far, but I don't think he's willing to admit it.

P.S. Your English is just fine!