My dear riverbella, I have never had my writing described to me in such a lyrical way and I'm utterly flattered to find it here. I love what you found inside this story and I think, yeah, melancholy just about sums it up. I hadn't thought about it like that, but you're. As for the line you picked, I love it too, even though I don't remember writing it. It was just part of the day, something that surged up. I really really appreciate your comments. I'm rather glowing right about now!