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Friday, August 7th, 2009 11:27 am (UTC)
Not sure where the best place was to leave you feedback, but had to just post SOMETHING!

What an awesome fic. The imagery, the pacing. The poor, broken, messed up boys. I LOVE how you tied the Dean/Sam dynamic from "during" to the "end". That while now they're both whole, their interaction at the restaurant really isn't all that much different to how it was in the hospital! Dean takes care of Sam and always will. Sam looks to Dean for guidance and Dean needs that.

I adored the original characters as well. Wonderful job with that.

Can I say IMAGERY again? I saw AND felt the Treatment, the unattainable window in their room, the drone of the dryers, the cold rain, etc. as if I were there.

And Floyd! I've had Floyd floating in my head since I read the title and how that music fits this fic is amazing!

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