You do realize that I could talk to you about this forever if you let me...
But yeah, I don't like writing porn either, it's terribly hard because I don't have that kind of sex, that fantastic, out of this world, spine melting, guy-on-guy sex! Even if I were a guy and thusly inclined, I don't know anyone who has sex this good. So I really loved how your sex scenes felt as emotional as they did sexy as well as being relevant to the plot. I tried to do the same.
I thought your dates were great, I figured out early on that they were signifigant, and I enjoyed "Mac" telling "c" what the date and time was as a way of building "c's" trust and confidence.
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But yeah, I don't like writing porn either, it's terribly hard because I don't have that kind of sex, that fantastic, out of this world, spine melting, guy-on-guy sex! Even if I were a guy and thusly inclined, I don't know anyone who has sex this good. So I really loved how your sex scenes felt as emotional as they did sexy as well as being relevant to the plot. I tried to do the same.
I thought your dates were great, I figured out early on that they were signifigant, and I enjoyed "Mac" telling "c" what the date and time was as a way of building "c's" trust and confidence.