Oh man, this is so heavy with the angst. You have such a way of conveying feelings, from the heat and humidity to the trapped feeling of being a child.
John is really quite cold in this. I'm not sure he was always this hard, mostly because I don't see this coldness in the boys, but I have no doubt that there were times he was indeed as he appears here (or at least he seemed that way to his children). But I don't think he was quite this cold most of the time.
You do such a great job pulling me into this. I can feel Sam's resentment and sense Dean's guilt and anger. Well done!
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John is really quite cold in this. I'm not sure he was always this hard, mostly because I don't see this coldness in the boys, but I have no doubt that there were times he was indeed as he appears here (or at least he seemed that way to his children). But I don't think he was quite this cold most of the time.
You do such a great job pulling me into this. I can feel Sam's resentment and sense Dean's guilt and anger. Well done!