Wow. This was amazing. So very, very long, but worth every word. I love how you kept a lot of things constant, like, Sam's hair in Dean's mouth; Okay, okay; Before I was big, I was little. All the little things like that that kept coming back around gave the fic so much meaning and helped make so I felt like I always kind of knew what was going on in their heads, how meaningful seemingly meaningless words and moments are. I really wanted to slap the doctors at the hospital, especially the art woman, they way she spoke to them, like naughty little children who should know better, ugh, I hated her. I kept thinking, that's not going to help people get better, it's just teaching them to be better liars and not say the things that will get them into trouble, but not actually help with any core problems, but then I'm no shrink. The Treatment was just brutal, surely that's not allowed? Do places really do that or did you just use it for the fic? I really hope places don't really use that in real life 'cause it's just torture, plain and simple. I really liked Greer, it was like he always knew more than he let on, he knew exactly what was going on, it wouldn't have surprised me to learn that he knew Sam and Dean weren't taking their meds properly. But he really cared and I think was a lot smarter than any of the doctors there. I felt really sorry for Randy, poor guy just wanted some attention, but when all the wrong ways around getting some. He really just needed a friend, like Dean was to Sam, someone to be there all the time and have him be the centre of their world. I did spend a lot of the fic wanted to scream at Dean to "just call Bobby already" but I get why he didn't, and I can't blame him. He did his best, and I think he did an amazing job with what he had to work with. A really amazing fic, I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for what must have been really hard work getting this epic out. ;) Congrats.
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I love how you kept a lot of things constant, like, Sam's hair in Dean's mouth; Okay, okay; Before I was big, I was little. All the little things like that that kept coming back around gave the fic so much meaning and helped make so I felt like I always kind of knew what was going on in their heads, how meaningful seemingly meaningless words and moments are.
I really wanted to slap the doctors at the hospital, especially the art woman, they way she spoke to them, like naughty little children who should know better, ugh, I hated her. I kept thinking, that's not going to help people get better, it's just teaching them to be better liars and not say the things that will get them into trouble, but not actually help with any core problems, but then I'm no shrink.
The Treatment was just brutal, surely that's not allowed? Do places really do that or did you just use it for the fic? I really hope places don't really use that in real life 'cause it's just torture, plain and simple.
I really liked Greer, it was like he always knew more than he let on, he knew exactly what was going on, it wouldn't have surprised me to learn that he knew Sam and Dean weren't taking their meds properly. But he really cared and I think was a lot smarter than any of the doctors there.
I felt really sorry for Randy, poor guy just wanted some attention, but when all the wrong ways around getting some. He really just needed a friend, like Dean was to Sam, someone to be there all the time and have him be the centre of their world.
I did spend a lot of the fic wanted to scream at Dean to "just call Bobby already" but I get why he didn't, and I can't blame him. He did his best, and I think he did an amazing job with what he had to work with.
A really amazing fic, I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for what must have been really hard work getting this epic out. ;)
Congrats.