What a wonderful, engaging read that was! You paced the story beautifully. I loved it when Sam regained his memories...I didn't realize how much I had been missing the 'real' Sam, until he was back.
I think what impressed me more than anything was all the detail about America during the chase part of the story. Each and every detail, from the dusty realities of pitching hay bales to the feel of the open road on the plains to the fry bread and the hand-painted sign at the Mexican food stand, was just perfect!! They added so much to the story, were so evocative, and so in tune with Show's gestalt. I adored that farm family who took them in. FANTASTIC!
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I think what impressed me more than anything was all the detail about America during the chase part of the story. Each and every detail, from the dusty realities of pitching hay bales to the feel of the open road on the plains to the fry bread and the hand-painted sign at the Mexican food stand, was just perfect!! They added so much to the story, were so evocative, and so in tune with Show's gestalt. I adored that farm family who took them in. FANTASTIC!