I enjoyed every word o fit and was completely overwhelmed with how amazing the writing and concept are. Nothing I say no can do the story justice, but leaving no comment at all would be completely undeserving of such an awesome story.
I got interested in reading it because the summary sounded good, having a thing for Amnesia helped, too. And frankly, I looked at the banner and thought to myself: if the story is just half as good as the graphics then my life is made. In all honesty: it was even better ♥
The loony bin routine had me going nuts just by reading about it. It was all so monotone and gray and boring and mind numbing and I can really picture how that would dull Dean’s senses along with the meds. You did an amazing job capturing such a dull world where our boys are trapped and doubly so in Treatment, where they’re trapped inside their own heads, their own darkness. The way Sam was broken was really devastating and heart-wrenching. Dean still taking care of him like that was just incredibly painful to read, but better than when Dean thought Sam was dead. That was just the cruelest start a story with them both could ever take.
Their interactions inside were just wonderful in captioning their relationship. Behind the surface there was all that need and want that I associate with them being them, even under completely changed circumstances.
Dean, of course, had the tougher part to play in all this and his POV was convincing every step along the way. Even if he was a jerk sometimes, no wait, especially when he was a jerk to Sam he was perfectly trying to be himself. Sam being broken and being remade by Dean was an interesting aspect of their brotherly relationship captured. And well, how it went beyond the bond of brothers, really.
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I got interested in reading it because the summary sounded good, having a thing for Amnesia helped, too. And frankly, I looked at the banner and thought to myself: if the story is just half as good as the graphics then my life is made. In all honesty: it was even better ♥
The loony bin routine had me going nuts just by reading about it. It was all so monotone and gray and boring and mind numbing and I can really picture how that would dull Dean’s senses along with the meds. You did an amazing job capturing such a dull world where our boys are trapped and doubly so in Treatment, where they’re trapped inside their own heads, their own darkness. The way Sam was broken was really devastating and heart-wrenching. Dean still taking care of him like that was just incredibly painful to read, but better than when Dean thought Sam was dead. That was just the cruelest start a story with them both could ever take.
Their interactions inside were just wonderful in captioning their relationship. Behind the surface there was all that need and want that I associate with them being them, even under completely changed circumstances.
Dean, of course, had the tougher part to play in all this and his POV was convincing every step along the way. Even if he was a jerk sometimes, no wait, especially when he was a jerk to Sam he was perfectly trying to be himself. Sam being broken and being remade by Dean was an interesting aspect of their brotherly relationship captured. And well, how it went beyond the bond of brothers, really.
And the title btw is amazingly fitting. ♥