I loved how you included multiple cases in your fic. Most people only do one, and while that can be good, if you don't like the case/characters then it gets really boring. I liked how they were all different, and yet unique too. You did a great job.
I also liked Sam's personality/progression in this story. His thoughts were intriguing, and genuinely his. Same with Dean. I liked how their relationship didn't really change near the end. They aren't going to go on romantic candle lit dinners or confess their love/talk about their feelings at every turn. You kept them true to themselves.
I'd also like to thank you for your use of pictures. I liked being able to picture the places where they went, rather than reading long winded, unhelpful descriptions. xD
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I also liked Sam's personality/progression in this story. His thoughts were intriguing, and genuinely his. Same with Dean. I liked how their relationship didn't really change near the end. They aren't going to go on romantic candle lit dinners or confess their love/talk about their feelings at every turn. You kept them true to themselves.
I'd also like to thank you for your use of pictures. I liked being able to picture the places where they went, rather than reading long winded, unhelpful descriptions. xD
Great job, I enjoyed your work.
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