Writing From the Inside

Exactly, it really was about the places... I loved the road-trippy flow to the story, and the pictures really helped me read that. Sometimes, I get lost in the details, keep re-reading the same paragraph again cos I can't quite picture it (no fault of the author, I just don't always know what something is, or in this case, have any familiarity with small-town America, being Aussie), but your images were timed perfectly in the story right when I needed them most. Great idea, and they weren't too many either, where they might have disrupted the flow of the story, you used excellent judgement in where you included them.