I really like your take on their relationship; the way Sam describes the list(s) that Dean carries around in his head, always ready to be referred to, and how he's both honoured and angry by those lists. I enjoyed the way his brain argued with his body over what would be best for it.
I like how you make Dean a bit of a neat freak. I know many stories have him as a bit of a slob but it always made more sense to me that he would be more organized than that and for exactly the reasons you state: if something bursts in, you don't want to be fumbling for your weapons or tripping over your clothes.
Also your descriptions are fantastic. The breakfast had me drooling... and so did the haircut but for an entirely different reason. =}~~~
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I like how you make Dean a bit of a neat freak. I know many stories have him as a bit of a slob but it always made more sense to me that he would be more organized than that and for exactly the reasons you state: if something bursts in, you don't want to be fumbling for your weapons or tripping over your clothes.
Also your descriptions are fantastic. The breakfast had me drooling... and so did the haircut but for an entirely different reason. =}~~~