That was quite lovely. You have clearly been to the Grand Canyon because your descriptions painted pictures of it that were alive to all the senses. Exquisite. The sense of place, the melancholy tone, the emotion, the mead and the moon. The love. A beautiful exploration of both internal and external landscape that echoed each other like a shout at the edge of a canyon. I made myself pick just one line to quote, and chose this one because its imagery and the feeling it evokes go as deep as the Canyon itself.
All jagged, all exposed to the air, all giving voice to the silent time that had sliced them open.
Fairy Lights--the image and what it says about Dean, and about Sam--made a brilliant metaphor and a perfect title for a deeply moving story.
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All jagged, all exposed to the air, all giving voice to the silent time that had sliced them open.
Fairy Lights--the image and what it says about Dean, and about Sam--made a brilliant metaphor and a perfect title for a deeply moving story.