I liked this very much. I liked the imagery and the pace- the feeling of being suspended in time while time and how much Dean had left was ever present. I liked the grandeur of it and the little details.The bit charcters like the mysteriously appearing park ranger adding to the almost dreamlike feel but gave welcome touches of whimsy and humour. I very rarely comment as I very rarely read something thats unusual enough and interesting enough to make me sit up and notice but this certainly was. In fact my only complaint is that there was a few basic errors that were very jarring against how well written the piece was. It was little things like "loose" instead of "lose" and "know" instead of "now". Nothing a beta reader wouldn't catch but very easy to miss yourself (god knows I do). Please don't take this comment as bad feedback. I really did enjoy your story which is why these little details were so irksome as they were quite a jolting distraction. (or maybe its just me. The "loose" thing is a pet peeve.) In fact feel free to ignore me as I've just reread my comment and its all over the place. Coherent comments and wine do not mix. So I'll leave it with- I very much enjoyed your fic and would like to read more of your stuff. Thank you.
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In fact my only complaint is that there was a few basic errors that were very jarring against how well written the piece was. It was little things like "loose" instead of "lose" and "know" instead of "now". Nothing a beta reader wouldn't catch but very easy to miss yourself (god knows I do).
Please don't take this comment as bad feedback. I really did enjoy your story which is why these little details were so irksome as they were quite a jolting distraction. (or maybe its just me. The "loose" thing is a pet peeve.) In fact feel free to ignore me as I've just reread my comment and its all over the place. Coherent comments and wine do not mix.
So I'll leave it with- I very much enjoyed your fic and would like to read more of your stuff. Thank you.